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haha YES!

its about damned time some-one made an animation of him dieing...seriously he pisses me off...Great sound and great animation 10/10 and 5/5 great job

easter egg..

the easter egg reminds me of one of the guest comics for a web comic called F@NBOY$....

But other than that the animation its self was good
the voice acting was great, Good job Ego Raptor
Bites is by far the funniest one out of the gamer tonights in my opinion

don't listen to loofawash

This was amazing, and it had a deep meaning in the end, the lack of music made it a bit dry for me but for the setting I guess its acceptable. and to spell this animation out for loofawash, The protagonist is the guy who makes origami, antagonist being his job and the guy with blonde hair. The story is he hates his job and is there because others want him to be, he has the hots for one of the employees but has no idea how to reach. so he gives that all up in order to pursue what makes him happiest, his origami, and it makes sense because well thats how my brain would work... "man..my job sucks...man there is this guy here that won't stop antagonizing me...I should quit" and he does to pursue what is his dream and who knows maybe a certain female employee will notice ;) I think you should make another flash that transpires a few months after this one, keep up the good work!

ernest-aka-gooey responds:

Ahahah awesome. Thanks it actually makes me so happy when I get a review like this.
Well I guess it makes me feel good for two reasons
1. You like my work
2. You understand what the character feels
Reason 2 there is important to me 'cause how the character feels is how I feel. Welllll in a way. I suppose.
Idunno you just put your finger right on specific points in the story that are important to me.
Thanks for the review man. Awesome. Hehehe

the mouths..

The mouths movement kinda irked me, but other then that great tutorial, and a great animation!

Winzra responds:

Yeah, this is definitely something I am very new too. This was my first time attempting to lip sync and again, its been a learning process. Flash has so weird audio sync issues transferring from .fla to .swf but its something we intend to work on for future parts! Thanks so much for the review and we were glad you enjoyed other parts! :D

PS - Any request tutorial-wise for next episode? :D

meh..

Congrats on winning I guess..but I really don't see how this one, it was well animated, but the plot and comedy weren't great at all...so in all 3.33/10 and a 2/5...

sorry tom but..

The "There She is" series should have won it was more touching and better animated =/

well..its a start I guess

It was alright, the animation was ok, and as was the music and sounds...but your story line, you changed it some-what since the last episode, along with the picture of the koopa that Mario had, and how did said koopa get unroped? Why didn't mario use the bob-omb that luigi gave him..didn't luigi see Mario leave to save this koopa too? its small things like that that can break apart animations.

Over all 3/5

wow

You've come a long way man, I remember last year me and my friends were sitting down watching your series comparing our-selves to your characters, you did a great job and have vastly improved since you've started all I can say is great work man and I can't wait for the next one :D

it was alright

TokingMonking you have no idea how much work keepwalking would have had to put into this drawing each frame on paper.

But onto the review-
Music choice- Great 5/5 I thought the music fit pretty good with the theme and mood of the Animation
Animation- Good 4/5 The animation for doing it on paper was pretty good, not the best I've seen but deserving of at least some praise ;)
Theme/story- Good 8/10 I believe the whole brother versus brother thing is over done but you did a great job of animation it

wow..

And I was wandering yesterday when you would finish the series if ever..and here it is..Its quite an amazing series, your song choices for all of them fit the animations perfectly and the plots in each one are simply heart touching, you did a great job yet again

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